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My Raven in the Shadows |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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You are my raven in the shadows the stars that set me aflame you are the wind in my hair your voice ..i cannot tame you are my.. dark angel whispering of lust my shadow in the moonlight within you i trust my blood flows through warm veins once of cold ice my raven.. it is you my arms of the night in the shadows of dreams and passion of abyss i hear you call my name and i long for your kiss blood roses and thorns within my black leather vase come to me my raven to my bed of crimson lace let me share my passion my lipstick upon your face let me share my love as our limbs doth embrace in the shaft of the moonlight i see you appear Mmmmm it is you ....my raven you are finally here A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
This is very good and it made a picture in my mind of a shaft of moonlight my rave once appeared in, good work |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very enticing...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Ginners and James..and for peeking in today..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I always loved this one..especially in voice...darn my mind has lost me and I can't think of the word instead..you know though I mean on your site...lol **tired** tired** tired, I am..,wonder why? ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
yes the audio...thanks hon...yes vegas will do that to you..im still tired too.its always fun though...as long as we are winning haa...  A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Nice one!!!!! I enjoyed the visuals this poem brought!Sheila |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Great work ... I was totally lost in the beauty of the imagery ... ~verve |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Sheila and Verve..so glad you liked..nice to hear from you both.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh my, see what happens when I am gone for awhile? Whew, this is some awesome piece of writing. Steamy, with great images. And the feeling is so vivid. Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thanks hon..welcome back..missed you..your replys inspire to keep writing.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Victoria, I know a raven like that. A bringer of good luck perhaps. Write on Kethry Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Darkly passionate, mysterious....all the good ingredients, blended so well. Good show, V. Hardrock |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Kethry..thank you and i always do write on haa...appreciate your comments.. Hardrock..always nice when you whisper from the shadows.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Wow! One word... tremendous!  "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you tara...nice to hear from you..glad you enjoyed.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
Ahhhhh yes! Wonderfully imaginative and full of fire! A piece of poetry that makes you feel it! I loved it.....great job! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you for your kind words..and for taking time to read.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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