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Dark Poetry #2

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glorybox
Junior Member

since 2000-09-17

Posts 26

0 posted 2000-11-30 03:58 AM

Rooted in distress;
an impression imbedded
three feet deep dirtied
Expecting, maybe
to claim exception
for forgiveness clenched

Too weak, too weak girl
and speak of this no more

Whore in fashion
to accept a crashing
train occupancy
Which liquor kissed
lips plea innocence
to indulge in fantasy

Take sips, take sips girl
and shake this memory clean

Vodka princess
dance confession steps
and lay down quietly
Sleeping potion
like oceanside currents
flooding nimble veins

Sleep now, sleep now girl
and sweep shadows over your mind

Disturbed echoes
stirring silence spilled
soaked into the floor
Enemies sleep
beneath creeping hands
bounded around your throat

Rid this, rid this girl
and riddle your yesterday

Accept the notion
of a body spoken silence
sensing invitation
Penetrating wounds
to soothe invading words
of Denial's foolery

Lie down, lie down girl
and cry this wolf alone

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2000-11-30 08:11 AM

wow..these words do penetrate...making me really think deeply today...

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Suzanne Arlene
Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 377
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2000-11-30 11:29 AM

my you have very deep thoughts. Great poem I enjoyed the ride Suzanne

[This message has been edited by Suzanne Arlene (edited 11-30-2000).]

Verve
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 348
Singapore

3 posted 2000-11-30 01:57 PM

My ... this is truly thought-provoking ... very dark.
Simply powerful.

~verve

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