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Dark Poetry #2

Rain falls

liqwidnik
Junior Member

since 2000-11-04

Posts 33
Mantua, NJ, USA

0 posted 2000-11-29 08:24 PM

* This is a poem written to my friend Mike I really miss his friendship I wish he would forgive me unfortunately he won't listen to me*

Raindrops fall
friends leave
you want them back
they won't listen
will they ever return?
you only hope
tears run down your cheeks
once they would wipe them away
make you smile and laugh
but now.....
now they don't care
will you care ever again?
will you be my friend?

Rain falls
like tears from the sky
you make them stop
you bring out the sun
you saved so many lives one of them....
mine.
I miss friendships
They don't shine like the sun anymore

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2000-11-30 08:16 AM

I miss friendships
They don't shine like the sun anymore

I felt the want in these lines...I hope he returns...to bring back the shine in you

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

2 posted 2000-11-30 07:04 PM

nikki nice poem, i know what you mean

ps its gin

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2000-11-30 07:28 PM

tender, moving and sincere this one.

What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life.

Walt Whitman

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