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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-11-29 01:49 AM


Sensing the pain,
And feeling no gain,
Now you decide to seek,
The end to all means,
Journey you will travel,
Hoping some secrets you will unravel,
On the way to the destination,
I seem to sense a little hesitation,
Fear not for you will achieve,
The plans that you have set forth to conceive.



Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
1 posted 2000-11-29 05:58 AM


Xenox,
I really like this particularly the last two lines
Write on
Kethry


Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau


Verve
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 348
Singapore
2 posted 2000-11-30 03:07 AM



Hi Xeo ...

This is inspirational ... I like that sense of hope in your lines ...

~Verve

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