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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Walls that hold you prisoner Letting nothing of yourself to chance Walls made of concrete and stone Made me take a second glance I have hidden in walls that high Know how deceiving it's height can be Do i really want to scale it Is he worth that much to me Is he worth my fear of falling Not to sure what i may actually find locked behind the hidden doors that are locked inside his mind Oh God please give me answers To the uncertainty that has grown Are they his walls i fear so much Or is it the fear of my own. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Suzanne? I adore this message, in fact? I think I need to share this one with a friend. Well done, and I thank you. |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Thank you serenity.I am honored that you would like to share it with someone.You have made my day. take care Suzanne |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You wrote my heart! Thank you for this. |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Very well written!  I know how ya feel also. But in my case its my walls I am scared of.  Great piece, DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Dream Chaser Junior Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 32South Carolina |
Suzanne, my love has walls too...walls so high that I'll never be able to scale them..."Walls made of concrete and stone"...these walls of his will never shatter. I am forever locked outside of his mind. Your poem was very touching to me. I could relate to its message. Great write! Angel |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Miss Devine and dark Kisses We must have the same heart.I think the most sensetive people are hidden behind walls. Dream chaser the price is high but" Is he worth that much" If so girl you better get your climbin gear.lol take care and thank you for all your responses. Suzanne |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Suzanne...I was reading back through the archives and found this one of yours. I have never been disappointed in any of your poems...and this one was no exception. If I understand anything about my life, it's those walls. Well done. Hardrock |
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