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The Passion of Desire
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The Passion of Desire |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York 
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I would love to have comments before I give this poem to her. THX, LarBear Looking into your eyes I see your passion that does not hide Longing to hold you, so close and near To feel your body so soft and dear Quiet of the night, peaceful the sound Gentle kisses, the romantic allure Soft rains, rhythmic beats all around Glancing touches that are so pure Candles flicker the flames abound Holding you tight, is our passions cure Whisper breezes that fill the night Our natural intentions we can not fight The smell of your perfume fills the air My fingers explore your skin so fair My Fingertips give lingering glances Pleasures of desire no longer in question On your silk smooth skin, I take chances Seeking a revelation of self expression Moving my fingers in midnight passions My heart beats faster with much devotion Eyes that share sensations of lust The exact moment of intimate, trust Lips that meet, caressed with delight Tongues dance all through the night Bodies close and ever so near Enveloping life’s rhythmic passions Wanting, yearning love so dear Surrenders of body and souls Ecstasy of two shows no fear Senses confess with the essence of submissions Ravished with pleasure we lay through the night Talking and exploring we hold each other tight Feelings of love and feelings of tranquility Our passions of desire not left a mystery Taken by the pain of soon parting We savour our romantic encounter An experience that will last forever As if time stopped or didn’t matter You are a dream of pure beauty In my heart you live an eternity [This message has been edited by LarBear (edited 06-26-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~WooHoo Larbear!!! This is some passionate writing. I love it,...she will too,...trust me. hehe. Welcome here...awesome work. YUM!!! You've done well. hehe. Yes, yes,...give this to her.*Peace. [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 06-26-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I emailed you this instead....so I deleted it. Oops. *Peace. [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 06-26-2000).] |
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LarBear Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 138Kingston, New York |
Spitfire, Thank you for the spelling help. It does look better if the darn words were right. I have absolutely no offence whatsoever if you want to print it. With great pleasure do. I will post more poems latter. I have such great emotions that for some reason are better released in poems or words on paper. Thanks for the comments. LarBear LarBear Kingston, NY Native of Texas |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~LarBear,...write on then!!!....that's what this place is for,...releasing emotions???...creativity...etc. Atleast for me. hehe. I'll be watching for your stuff. *Peace. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes great work i also will be looking for more of your work and yes i think you should give this to her. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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