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LuckyinLove Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 57Australia |
(I know I can't spell very well so if you ever see spelling mistakes could you let me know, thanks, I will buy a dictionary one day) Who taught you how to cheat was it the norm in your street How do you enjoy life causing time to waste dealing in wine to taste You don't even realise how a person can despise the look of you to make me ill hiding behind the happy pill Skilled in the art of deseat who taught you how to cheat |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
WOAH!!!!!! GREAT poem!  There are so many variables in this poem!"Skilled in the art of deseat who taught you how to cheat" Hmm.... woah! Very deep indeed! Love this poem |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I guess it comes natural for some, I've never been that way, even when faced with impossable odds against me. It just isn't right. thanks. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Ahhhhhhh I spent nine long years with my cheating spouse. The pain never gets easier, and the wounds never go away. But new experiences do help ease the tears. Nice poem. Peace |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh LIL,...this is such a power packed piece. Good question you ask. Gggrrr. I hear every word you say. This particular line is such a killer...."Skilled in the art of deceit"....ouch!!! Thank you for sharing this. Take care now. *Peace. [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 06-26-2000).] |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is great i feel it cause i have been cheated on more then once. and it does hurt in its own little way. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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