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Awakening Spirit.....
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Awakening Spirit..... |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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There were no tears left to cry My inner being has seemed to of died The darkness suddenly turned cold My voice was no longer so bold My breathing had slowed way down I tried to scream but had no sound My eyes were red but not from tears My skin was pale from all my fears My hair turned as black as coal My lips were red from taking your soul The reflection in the mirror was no longer there The image of me was too much for others to bare Evil in my eyes made others run away I do not understand to this very day For I do not stalk, only I feed I try to survive on my worldly needs So when you drift off to sleep each night Dont wake up screaming in such a fright That your blood pumps faster through your vein Because that only makes it easier for me to drain So lay there calmly and listen to what I say You will wake up smiling the very next day Okay Okay I know a little different!!! lol No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A little different you say!!!  makes me wonder if your the type of girl my Mother should have warned me about. (just kidding) Seriously though, this was hypnotically chilling! I liked. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Mags...this is not your first poem about being on the dark side. But it still has that same great quality of making one leave the light on at night. Very well, and darkly, done. Hardrock |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
It is scary how we're starting to think alike. Take a look at mine I hope you are feeling better sweetie!!!!Jerm "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
MMmmm ... I like the darkness. Cool. ~verve |
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