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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738
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Hmm... just a silly thing I wrote early November... not all that poetic really... was just havin' some fun  MARS i'm kinda worried about this and that and me. fire dancing in my mind in my heart in my eyes. wondering what's happening thinking too much of floating in the sky. touching the stars looking down hmm... maybe from mars. ~ Tara ~ 8th Nov. 2000< !signature--> "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish [This message has been edited by taramw (edited 11-24-2000).] |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Tara..."Mind therapy" I call it....when you just let your mind float free, without forcing any thoughts or "thinking too much". Most of us do it, but most of us don't write about it. I'm glad you did, and that you shared it with us. Hardrock |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
This is an interestingly light piece, I liked it allot. With all of the heavy emotions being shared in this forum, it's nice to see something on the lighter side. Thanks for sharing.  G Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Pshawwww!! You do well when having fun!! I really enjoyed this whimsical piece of work.  Thank you for sharing it!Sheila |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great.......i was just looking at mars the other day.....so beautiful! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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