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Wind Whisper
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Wind Whisper |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia 
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Gentle breaking wind lift my fragmented soul Inhale the ashes of my spirit Exhale to places unknown Away from garrulous seasons of doubt shallow, teasing gale that stirs the melodies of my heart then slices with agony's wail Please! Sweet Tempest!! Take me now! Leave no piece in your wake Sacrifice to oblivions sighs No more cherished heart to forsake. Sheila 11/23/00 Life is a journey.. not a destination.. - unknown |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
~Please! Sweet Tempest!! Take me now!~ loved that line, mind you I liked the rest of it too.  "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Dream Chaser Junior Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 32South Carolina |
As I read I could picture the wind picking up the fragmented pieces of my soul and blowing them to the four corners of the earth. Very good. I enjoyed it very much. Angel |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
I love this one! I too like wind. Check out my poem entitled(no surprise, lol) Wind. This one was short and sweet. It was sort of reminiscent of Shelly's Ode to the West Wind. Good work. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Shelia...I DO enjoy your poetry so much. This one had such good vibes...that's the only way I could describe it. Hardrock |
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