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I Miss You |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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I miss you. I just thought you should know, that I want you back, before I have to go. I miss you. I can't live like this, waiting my whole life, for just one kiss. I miss you. I need you to help me. there's all this stuff in my heart, waiting for you to see. I miss you. I just want to be in your arms. I just want to be near you, safe from harm. I miss you, but I could get you back. I need more confidence, that's something I lack. I miss you, even though you're not gone, I haven't known you forever, not even very long, but I miss you. For Justin (my ex) Allysa I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Very song like. Could almost sing this one out, soft and melodic, could hear the music, and sway with the gentle rhythm. It would make a very good song  With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Allysa, This one almost made me cry...It's excatly how I'm feeling right now with my (?) boyfriend. Communication lines seem to be down on his side, and I'm almost ready to give up. Great job in revealing these feelings in such a lovely poem.  |
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PureM Junior Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 22London, UK |
Allysa, your poem said it all for me! I feel exactly like this about the person I love. I can only hope she is missing me too...? Any girl who wrote like this for me would have me back straight away! |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
dragonpoe: hmmm. I've never written a song before! glad you liked it. broken_winged_angel: all guys have trouble communicating sometimes. They are so confusing!!! PureM: my ex won't be reading this any time soon. I'm mad at him at the moment and I'm trying to decided weither to talk to him or to tell him to go to hell. Allysa I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
I like this and i know how you feel about your ex and everything i have a lot of the same feelings for mine right now and i miss him so much "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN "There is no always forever, just this"-the cure |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Oh wow! I know how you feel or at least knew couple of months ago... but I've decided I don't really need him, I can find better, right? But I miss someone else...  "I can't live like this, waiting my whole life, for just one kiss. I miss you." Totally my situation... Love stinks! Loved the poem, take care! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I am missing a special woman right now and longing for her kiss...our day will come...James |
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Kevin Rose Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 64Liverpool UK |
I too related to this on a personal level because of what I am going through... It seems there are a lot of broken hearts on passions at the moment and you have played a perfect ballad on all of their heart strings, mine included. If we are not careful this thread could become the lonely hearts column of the forum!! |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Thanks you guys. Actually, we are the Lonely Hearts people now. And it's most likely because while the person who's fault we are lonely it is we love, I personally think that Justin is an idiot, but what do I know?? Anyways, thanks Kevin for brightening up my day! Allysa I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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