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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Impossible to Please If I was really in search of honesty would a sincere and open person come to me? So that I could open up this heart to expose the truth and set myself free? And as truth is given the freedom it needs for every interested and eager eye to see could this heart survive the exposure and would this mind bear the scrutiny? For fearfully I don't think I really know who I am. And if the truth could be known I have a need to know exactly where I stand. For an example do I know how to show appreciation for all the blessings coming my way? If so then why am I so busy driving them all away. Why is it so hard for me to firmly say she is almost exactly that which I want and need. Why am I so demanding and impossible to please? To be perfectly honest with you if I really know how to perhaps more acceptance would fulfill my need or perhaps I simply fear the opportunity to succeed. Jameslee@November20,2000 |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
If we could understand our own needs who knows what this world would be like. I enjoyed this read, nice work. There's a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on In the end There's a peace inside us all -Creed |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
why am I so busy driving them all away. I often ask myself the same thing...and I answer soemtimes that I am not deserving of the good within my reach "perhaps I simply fear the opportunity to succeed" also...and with it it's many responsibilities very thoughtful you are this morning, James ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
If I was really in search of honesty would a sincere and open person come to me? So that I could open up this heart to expose the truth and set myself free? And as truth is given the freedom it needs for every interested and eager eye to see could this heart survive the exposure and would this mind bear the scrutiny? <- really love these lines.  With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Ya know, I was talking to an ex boyfriend of mine a couple weeks ago and he said the same thing to me. That he tried so hard to please me, yet I kept pushing him away. That he only wanted to see my smile. He said that he had seen me laugh at jokes ect ect, but never really seen me smile. After all that I really thought about it and it hurt. I never realized that I was that bad. Anyways, you did an excellent job here. Nicely written! DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
I'm no PhD in psychology, but I'd say that you're afraid that you'll not be pleased with whoever comes to you. Personally, I've always believed that our "soul mates" are predestined to be with us. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
This is a tricky one.. hmmm. I kinda believe they are destined to find us somehow. There is more involved than just you and them, there is a bigger picture.. And our part to play in all that is to be open to all that comes our way, experience these experiences, and see what happens - come what may... Don't get me wrong we have to work at it, and so do they... Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
maybe it is hard for you to believe they love you..and you want them to keep proving it to you..i dont know..i was just sitting here trying to figure that one out too .. enjoyed reading your words James.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Martinque Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 69 |
Experience makes for great wisdom. Nothing lost and nothing gained. font>< !signature--> [This message has been edited by Martinque (edited 11-22-2000).] |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Food for thought for sure James. Great write. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Say they, "search within thy heart, then thou shalt know just where to start" but I say, some things need no explanation rejoice in love with celebration! touching read... -Tier |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A wonderful expression of your thoughts! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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