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kaile
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0 posted 2000-11-17 11:19 AM


As nighttime comes unwounded,
a serene air settles
All is asleep
He summons
reluctant courage
to go peek
into his inner self
Apprehensive of what he'll face

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Jannel
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1 posted 2000-11-17 12:06 PM


this was really interesting. i liked the art about summoning the courage to peek inside himself. have you everseen the neverending story? atreiu (sp?), the hero, has to face his true self, and that is his biggest challenge. that's what this reminded me of. nice job.

jann

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