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Ping Pong serve to Kaile (With the stars within my reach)
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Ping Pong serve to Kaile (With the stars within my reach) |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
With the stars within my reach The world fell out of hand Grasping, flailing for the night, As she slipped through silken sand The moon, I might just touch But solidity falls behind Farther into her depths I travel With liquid blackness blind The galaxies I hold Their symmetry unbound Eternity is welcoming me As nighttime comes unwound |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Awwwwww Loved it!! Great Job!  DkW (and u are welcome for the starting line. tried to make it easy) No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
this poem gives me a serene feeling here, Jannel...liked the phrases "silken sand" and "liquid blackness blind" a lot now my turn to play..hope i can do it as well as you |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
thanks guys. this is fun! If you can feel that staying human is worthwhile, even when it can't have any result whatever, you've beaten them. -1984 |
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