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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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You want the dark? you yearn, the shadow? a touch of sacred made, unhallowed? Want me? serpentine within? (whisper) want me (whisper) sin... taste me... (own me...) waste me... (lonely...) like an orphan-- take me in... taste me... (own me...) wasted.... lonely? lonliness my only sin... an ache of thighs and wonder whys, and every wonder cries within... simple sighs the taste of lies-- growing fonder, loving him... [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 11-16-2000).] |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
"and every wonder cries within... simple sighs the taste of lies--" <- absolutely love these lines! This has a good quality to be put to an alternative sounding music, sung the same, with a dark music to accompany it. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
a pondering, awe-struck, "wow"..is all I can say to this. So few words that describe so much passion and yearning. I really liked this! Sheila |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Yes WOW! This flowed so smoothly. It was so beautiful to read just for the way it all went together. Great work, my Friend.  DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Cool... it's really good, like a tune playing in my head. Enjoyed it a lot! Take Care! |
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