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Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
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0 posted 2000-11-16 01:12 AM


I thought you were mine
Each night I layed awake
I believed you loved me
Yet those words are now so fake
I only wanted to love you
To show you my inner-self
Giving you everything I had
You would of been covered in wealth
But once again you walked away
Telling me all those lies
Making me look like a fool
I just dont understand why
I would of given you the world
Taking away your pain
Yet that wasnt enough for you
There is nothing left to gain
So once again I walk alone
Along the sandy beach
Not knowing where I may end up
With the stars within my reach



No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


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Xeonox
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1 posted 2000-11-16 01:20 AM


Great work my friend. Simply well put.  

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



Jannel
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
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2 posted 2000-11-16 10:42 PM


This is really nice. And thanks for giving me such a great line to work with.  

Jann Elizabeth

If you can feel that staying human is worthwhile, even when it can't have any result whatever, you've beaten them.
-1984


kaile
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3 posted 2000-11-17 11:06 AM


simple, short, intense read thank you
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