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Sparkle in the Water
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Sparkle in the Water |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Way down at the bottom There's a sparkle In the water Way down at the bottom You can barely see it shine Way down at the bottom You can almost reach it with your eyes But then It darts Quickly Away |
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CourtneyNdremeda Junior Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 15 |
How sad... and for me...once i glimpse that shimmer of light, it quickly gets covered with the darkness again. thanks for thinking of this...i think its a great way to express this, Love, Ipek |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
hmmm... i am feeling wistful now. i especially liked the ending. jann elizabeth If you can feel that staying human is worthwhile, even when it can't have any result whatever, you've beaten them. -1984 |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
hmmmmmmm yes that was different. Makes ya wonder why some things are only possible to look at and NOT touch! Good Poem DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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