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I Will Remember You
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I Will Remember You |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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I will remember, everything about you. Although he took you away, there's nothing else he can do. I will remember, how you always smiled, and how I only knew you, for a short while. I will remember you, just remember me, okay? I can guarantee, that we think about you every day. I will remember, and we'll never let go. Just as long as you're in our hearts, this I know you know. I will remember you, you're memory will live on, it's only your body, not your spirit, that's gone. I will remember you, just please don't forget it, a memory will last forever, as long as you let it. Add on if you want to. This is for my friend Jesica. I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Allysa, this is lovely but sad. It's true thopugh in our memory is where people live on beyond death and departure. Be well Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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CourtneyNdremeda Junior Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 15 |
Allysa, i hope this doesn't bring down the meaning and significance of your poem in anyway but i could also relate this poem to...ANYONE you love just being taken away from you, by someone else. You remember the short time you had with them...and then they're gone. And the only thing u wish for is that some part of them remembers you... Again, i sincerely hope that i didn't ruin the significance of your poem in anyway [i'm being a forlorn love fool, so everything i read somehow reminds me of love  ]love, Ipek |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Okay, ummm, my friend Jesica, was murdered by her step father, and I'm kind of taking this a little bit harder than I thought I was at first. I write poems for her and also telling my friend and ex-boyfriend, why I am so upset. I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
~*Bump*~ I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Hi Allysa, I am so sorry to hear that. I understand completely how much the hurt must be for you ... I pray your pain will pass ... By the way, this was a really good tribute in her memory. ~verve |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
I am so sorry to hear of your pain. This was a beautiful piece written just for her. I hope writing helps ease your pain a little bit more each day.Prayers for you, Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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MysticWonders Member
since 2000-12-11
Posts 60Massapequa NY |
My sympothys to you...I lost a dear friend this year...and reading this made me think of him...and with that thought a smile appeared...*S* Danyel |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
thanks ya all! But I g2g, so cyas around! I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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