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Back from the Edge |
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carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
-On the Edge- sitting upon the edge of a dream i got lost, and in between i lost the will to live i lost the taste of love i lost the bite of a person standing on the top of the end i found life's meaning again i got lost within i found the smell of a lie such a subjugated being was i living around the edge i asked i cried i passed sleeping below the ridge i dreamt of what all is i didn't try before i didn't soul explore i didn't get lost between and forgot to stand on the edge of a dream J.L. Koehler Peace, Love, and Happiness Forever |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
carolinadreams, I'm sorry you forgot to stand at the edge of a dream. I believe we need dreams to live. Great poem. Be well Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
I don't dream all the time. I stand at the edge too. Great poem Suzanne |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
This one really got to me.... I really can relate to this one. ...beth [This message has been edited by Lady Lost (edited 11-13-2000).] |
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CourtneyNdremeda Junior Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 15 |
Recently i totally lost the will to do anything. I literally just went limp for a few days and didn't talk to anyone, didn't do ANYTHING. Thats why I particularly loved your beginning lines: "sitting upon the edge of a dream i got lost, and in between i lost the will to live i lost the taste of love i lost the bite of a person standing on the top of the end" you wrote all the things i wanted to say with a skill i dont believe i quite have yet... i look forward to reading more of your writings, Love, Ipek |
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