Dark Poetry #2 |
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Feelings |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738![]() |
My heart feels like it's empty My eyes feel full of tears My head is full of emotion My body full of these fears. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
a great poem with an evil in comforting words based on a soul and heart of fear's great work keep it up I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Short and very direct...always a favorite style of mine. Once again you've expressed your feelings very clearly and honestly. Well done ![]() D.E. Listen to your heart for it knows the way even when you don't. ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
Short but gets the point across. Fantastic ![]() Let nature guide your soul. Follow the path that nature gives. |
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Portia Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 157 |
Unfortunately, you've captured how I feel a lot of the time. Succinct and to the point. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
concise and powerful. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. "Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Piccaso "You do not destroy an idea by killing people; you replace it with a better one". Edward Keating Pablo Picasso ----- |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I've felt the exact same way hon. Well written to display such emotions in so few words. ![]() I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Did I miss this one? Silly me! As the others said, this expresses so well those emotions you feel when you are really down. And short I love! (hadn't guessed that one had you? ![]() Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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