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Click
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since 2000-06-11
Posts 202
USA

0 posted 2000-11-11 12:03 PM




As I lie next to you,
you make me feel so strange.
And then you reach for me,
wispering my name.

When I look at you,
I catch you looking at me.
And when you are so close,
you know that I can't breath.

I sense all the pain inside,
I see all the happiness.
It's in the very way you move,
I feel it in your caress.

I'll do my best,
to soothe your fear.
I mean the things,
wispered in your ear.

So hold me tight,
never letting go.
I'm here for you,
'cause I love you so.  


Click



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Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 2000-11-11 02:15 AM


Ohhhhh...this is so nice...gave me the warm-fuzzies...

lovely to read

K



The wind shifts like this:
Like a human without illusions...
This is how the wind shifts:
Like a human, heavy and heavy,
Who does not care.

W.S

taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

2 posted 2000-11-11 03:59 AM


This is beautiful Click    Very sweet...
~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

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