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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Haunting dreams; you reach out through misty blue haze of time. My arms and heart are open wide. I reach for you through golden promises, holding tight. Still dawn breaks and you dissolve with the light. Only memories of love proven false, in my sight. Shall I wrap myself in blue-red time? Can I keep you close? Will it help to deny? If only day would leave me alone with the night... |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Oh, my.. wow. Such passion! Strange how we long for the night and the promises found there. Good job, here. Sheila (crakker)  |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Night always brings memories and dreams, questions and answers. An ebony curtain, Night falls. My hand reaches out, Slips deeper into a shadow of a shadow. Whispers of whispers, Swirl about my ears. Faint scents cascade in my memory, Waterfalls of tears. The thumping of a ghostly drum, Heart be still. With closed eyes, I see clearly, With secrets revealed, Deep inside the shadow of shadows < !signature--> Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox [This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 11-08-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~"Shall I wrap myself in blue-red time?",....loving your use of words S. I just wish it didn't hurt so much, although you have been busting out some kick ass poetry.  . No sa,...I'd take it away in a heartbeat if I could. Wishing you *Peace. |
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PoetryNest Junior Member
since 2000-11-08
Posts 46Orlando, FL. 32703 |
Expressess the feeling well. Nice job. Cynthia (A Dove) Proctor [img]http://www.geocities.com/a_dove2000/cin1997.gif[/img] |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Lovely Sandra *sigh* Expressed so well. Take care.~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
beautiful poem.I have felt those feelings too. Maybe we should just go back to bed lol Suzanne |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey this was great. Often at night i start to muse over things i wouldnt have if the world ran on DAY all the time hehe....great post!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sandra...this is wonderful wonderful writing... I reach for you through golden promises, holding tight. Still dawn breaks and you dissolve with the light. Love this in particular... Hugs... K The wind shifts like this: Like a human without illusions... This is how the wind shifts: Like a human, heavy and heavy, Who does not care. W.S |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
I like the "blue-red time" line as well. this was really nice. jann elizabeth If you can feel that staying human is worthwhile, even when it can't have any result whatever, you've beaten them. -1984 |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
"Haunting dreams; you reach out through misty blue haze of time." That stanza will haunt me...beautifully written! |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Color images....funny that, tears are clear...good write! I like it. Thanx!! Click |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
dear dear moonbeam... this is truly up there with one of your best. i just love this. simply divine. i can say no more.... kynder "Full is not heavy as empty, not nearly, my love, not nearly...." Fiona Apple |
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