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Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
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Escondido-California

0 posted 2000-11-05 10:44 AM


This is a repost but a fitting one for what is going on in my life and I can't seem to get it to post in line right so I am sorry for the looks.


Eviction Notice  


I scan the realms of my soul finding turbulent
times, and you are at the heart of it.  
I gave of myself openly and with no restrictions, you were given free access to my entire domain.

In the beginning you showed true love for your new abode, never stomping on the tender resources  
available. But a change has taken place in this realm were my heart resides, soon there shall be
an eviction notice.

You have forgotten that you must maintain your surroundings with care and nurture
that with which was given so freely. You’ve left this realm a shambles and scorched its walls.
What is left is a desolate wasteland of ghostly hallows,
and raptured treasures strewn about carelessly.


You give careful aim to hit the corner stones that
give strength and security, gouging out
brick by brick each momentous gain forward that
we accomplished together. When presented
with the facts you maintain your ignorance and calm my sights are not properly attuned
to yours, there for I am not seeing the matters
at hand clearly.

No showing of reversal in your attitudes, or do you seem to fear the loss of our realties thought
to of been built on a solid foundation together.
Termination has been presented to you
and it is now in your court as to how things
will end up.

You better take careful thought, for I shall up hold this eviction as strongly as I up held
my unwavering love and devotion for you. I shall
await your reply and I  hope you know
that this could be a chance at renewing a very
special place that can only be found
in the heart.


BY, Cerenity






"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


© Copyright 2000 Ellen Ware - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2000-11-05 12:57 PM


Wow, C...this was so, so...I am at a loss for the word...{{huggz)

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2000-11-05 02:15 PM


Strong words issued to someone that it seems is emotionally unavailable to you...James
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-11-05 08:53 PM


Hello me sister.  Seems there is a lot of this going around. I enjoyed this much, see...I've been nailing some notices to doors myself. I love the conviction and fortitude behind this...simply stated but calmly...and that always scares the crap out of 'em...LOL...Hugs, winks, and love. Thanks.
Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
4 posted 2000-11-06 09:55 PM


Hi
Wynter, James, Serenity,

Hi to all of you, hope your day was awesome, and thank you so much for you wonderful replys. This is one of those writes that unfortunelty can be applied more than once, and in my case quiet often, the little doo-doo has to learn how to treat people (ME) better or he's going to find out his key does not work any more, thank you again friends.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
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The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2000-11-06 10:31 PM


Good for you, evict the bum!
I love this, glad you brought it back.
Sandra

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