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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2000-11-05 12:02 PM

Abandoned

I touch the heart, the one of stone.
It's coldness seeping into skin.
Replacing all that use to be,
Losing self, abandoning.

Each day that travels, timelessly
I seek to hold onto a void,
An emptiness that stares at me,
Mirrored only, in eyes destroyed.

The darkness reigns in circles wide.
Beneath a mixture, salty tears
That trickle down to lips that taste
The bitterness, the wasted years.

Sadly, joy has left the hold.
In moonlight pale, heard whimpers, soft,
Desiring lips to kiss the hurt
And send my cloudlike, dreams, aloft.

Reality come darkness, falls.
Endlessly awaiting light,
For golden beams to set me free,
Hoping to survive the night.

~Wynter

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-05-2000).]

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

1 posted 2000-11-05 01:08 AM

I hate to see a good poem abandoned - so up to the top with this one!

Chris

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-11-05 01:14 AM

i thought this was great. Going through ruffffff times eh? If so, i'm here for ya..

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2000-11-05 07:26 AM

thank you Christopher, title was perfect!huggzz

D_D- thank you, I have sent you an e-mail just giving you a brief explanation.I am sure all of us have our wrinkles to iron out.

Thank you both.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

4 posted 2000-11-05 10:48 AM

Wynter...I am truly touched. I can't believe you dedicated a poem for me. i don't even know what to say, except thank you, you are the warmest wynter I've ever known. (I've said that before).

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2000-11-05 11:19 AM

Yes you have said that before, Ron

I just am so inspired after reading, a thought here and a thought there...then words begin to rise in me and I have to pen them. Thank you for allowing me to share them
with you.

~Wynter (Warmth) Bliss

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

6 posted 2000-11-05 11:27 AM

Inspiration is the greatest gift we share here...Glad I was one...And you realize it is vice a versa...You have also inspired myself and others, I'm sure...so a Thank you too.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2000-11-05 04:51 PM

Ron, I always look forward to your visits, to brighten my day.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

8 posted 2000-11-05 05:18 PM

As I said before, thank you also...and the poem Winter kiss was in response of your response to me...and now you have responded with another poem to my winter kiss...ah, such a circle of words should never end...thank you much

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2000-11-06 04:41 PM

Ron- We have to stop meeting this way

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

10 posted 2000-11-06 06:09 PM

our paths have crisscrossed...but if it was even only briefly I am glad i could make you smile...you need to break from dark passions...I want to see you write of brighter and lighter things...well as soon as you beat the flu... and then you can beat the past too...rest, get strong and kick some...well you know.

thanks you for the kind email...you're the best
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Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

[This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 11-06-2000).]

liqwidnik
Junior Member

since 2000-11-04

Posts 33
Mantua, NJ, USA

11 posted 2000-11-06 06:26 PM

Sorry to interupt a conversation, ..... but this was a really great poem. I enjoyed reading it a lot. Keep up the good work

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

12 posted 2000-11-06 10:39 PM

This is a great work, Wynter.
I like the way you are writing, I don't know what is different,exactly, and I have liked everything of yours I have read. But the last two or so have had a different touch, which I like even more.
Feel well, friend.
Sandra

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