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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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I don't cry anymore. Not like I used to; like I did when you first went away. I don't cry anymore. Not like my heart will break; like I will die without you. I don't cry anymore. Though my heart remains cracked; though I may still die of sadness. I don't cry anymore. There's nothing left to cry for. It's too late for love, and it's too late to cry. I don't cry anymore. Because I can't. Because I'm just too cold. My tears are frozen. |
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LuckyinLove Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 57Australia |
That makes me want to cry, I used to write how I would'nt cry anymore but i did and did and did, but I haven't for a while now. So maybe my tears are frozen like ice. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Lucky, wouldn't it be great if we stopped crying because there was no reason to anymore??? catalinamoon |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
great poem. enjoyed the read and thanks for posting it. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
they use to ask me, don't you care what she is doing, when I finally got it across to them that I didn't they stopped asking. My tears dried cold also. then not cold just dust.. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Great Poem!  Numbness? Yeah, the tears do just dry up. Good read. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Tears are the rivers that flow from the heart.....but I quit crying on the outside years ago. A fine piece of work here Cat.......Hardrock |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Catalinamoon,...I could almost hear you reading this aloud. It just reads so perfectly...so sad though when this happens. Please take care. *Peace. |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Your tears may be frozen, but your heart is still alive with warmth. Let that love lead you to a new hope, and someday a new love. Elise |
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shira Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 88Hamburg, PA |
Aaaah, I know the feeling well. You put it into words so well. Very nice, sad poem. -Shira |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Very very nicely done. Someone should put this into a song! ~verve |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Wow very powerful poem--I luved the ending--yea i agree with the song thing--I can hear the beat in my head LOVE ELMO<3 |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
mine are almost frozen..ha..im not kidding..just a little numb lately..Hugs ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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MysticWonders Member
since 2000-12-11
Posts 60Massapequa NY |
This was a great poem, something i will think back on when i am about to shed tears  If you can't be true to yourself...you won't be true to others :( |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You CAN only mourn so much and in effect then your tears do become frozen. It doesn't mean they pain is any less..... Stay strong hon, the light is STILL there up ahead.. Beautiful portrayl here hon *hugs* Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
i think too many of us remain "frozen" for too long...when you find what can "warm" us..let me know...i could use a day without numb...great poem.... ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Beautiful... Have nothing more to say. Take Care! |
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