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Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration

0 posted 2000-11-05 03:43 AM



Darkness Dreaming

I am the man of your dreaming:
Dank spectre holding your smile.
A mythical Casanova...
The object of your denial.

I’ll graze your echoes of laughter-
Glide through night-crystal fears.
I’ll crush your intimate rainbows
Shelling out heart aching tears.

I’ll challenge your mind for meaning,
Feed from your soul bleeding pain.
The infamous childe of Bedlam,
Come to the fore once again.

So whisper your breath’s lullabye,
Call me, you wretched disgrace.
I’m a blood hound fond’ling secrets
From imaginations chaste.

Scream out my name in the Darkness-
Beg for my feathery arms.
The caress of evil appeal
Invoked by maidenly charm.

My touch spans waters of distance,
Drowning your hopes in my light.
March through your marshes of terror
Searching my sadist’s delight.

I’ll bring you a rose thorny free
To taste of it’s velveteen skin.
Then banish it to forever,
Virtue turned into a sin.

In hunting you’re my only prey;
A rabbit panicked in sleep.
I chase as you’re crying away,
Then laugh as I feed...you weep.

I am the man of your dreaming:
There’s no escaping my gaze.
Just lay in quivering terror...
For I am your end of days.


© Copyright 2000 C.G. Ward - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2000-11-05 09:50 AM


ah...I consider this one a classic---I remember it well, because I saved it then, and have read it many many times.  Thank you very much for the re-play.  Obviously a favorite of mine.
taramw
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since 2000-06-08
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2 posted 2000-11-05 11:49 AM


Loved how you ended this!    Thoroughly enjoyed the read  
~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
3 posted 2000-11-05 12:16 PM


Good grief!! Talk about giving a person the shivers.    Very well described here! (looking over my shoulder)

DkW


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
4 posted 2000-11-05 12:40 PM


Darn!! A sadist at heart...I do believe

~Wynter

*I did enjoy it.


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Dopey Dope
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5 posted 2000-11-05 04:01 PM


Phew!! Powerful Chris, very powerful. A wonderful read and I thank you for sharing. Phew!!!



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
6 posted 2000-11-05 06:49 PM


Hey thanks all - just kinda like to bring out the darkside sometimes!  
Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
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Texas
7 posted 2000-11-05 07:45 PM


Oh Chris, put me down as a fan of yours! Wow! ...reality check time!!  good one. Marcy
Lady Lost
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8 posted 2000-11-05 08:08 PM


What I REALLY want to say would be inappropriate.  This is excellent.  You are an amazing poet.  This is an amazing poem.  I have much more to say about this.  Maybe another time.

...beth

Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
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9 posted 2000-11-06 05:28 PM


Heeeeeey...lookie what we have here...I 'member this'n..

I keep wanting to dig into interpretations! LOL     How about I just re - re  - re - relax (whew!) and enjoy this bit 'o dark poetry!  

Like it!

liqwidnik
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since 2000-11-04
Posts 33
Mantua, NJ, USA
10 posted 2000-11-06 06:20 PM


I loved this poem it was awesome and sent chills down my spine really enjoyed it
LV
-Nikki-

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
11 posted 2000-11-06 09:00 PM


This is you? I thought it was that guy that broke my heart..
Love it.
Sandra

Rosebud1229
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12 posted 2000-11-06 11:50 PM


this is very magnetic, draws you in,
loved it

Christopher
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13 posted 2000-11-07 12:35 PM


again - thank you all!

Beth - can I read it to you?  

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