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Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-11-01 06:14 PM


There is something
I finally realized between you an I
Although we never had anything in common
We always had this passion for each other
That killed are souls

We have this driving love for each other
That would never end
We always wanted each other

But when we simply talked it was a realization
It was simply the passion for the other
That can never leave the soul

Cause we simply
Love each other

-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)


[This message has been edited by Neala (edited 11-02-2000).]

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catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-11-01 06:45 PM


Hope this has a happy ending. I understand the feelings well. Good poem.
Sandra

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-11-01 09:03 PM


Hey Neala!  Long time no see, glad to see you here again..
I can relate to this one, for I too know what a love beyond comprehension is, when it is bigger than the both of you, when neither of you can understand it or make sense of it, but it is there anyways.....
Hope it all works out hon....
Isis

*I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

3 posted 2000-11-02 10:57 AM


We don't always understand love. it is a powerful force. sometimes you must heed to it's calling. Things always work out. Best wishes

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox


Neala
Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
4 posted 2000-11-02 09:34 PM


Hey
Thanks for the reply it is always nice to know I can come back an be welcome.
-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

firejerm
Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA
5 posted 2000-11-02 10:56 PM


This left me completely confused at the end, but I understood it until then    Would like to read more  

Jeremy

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2000-11-03 03:24 AM


Enjoyed reading this...James
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