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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738
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by a thread you keep me hanging on. like a spider you weave and spin around me tying me down. entrapped no longer wanting or willing to traverse without you. i become the fly within your spiders web. ~ Tara ~ 31.10.00 < !signature--> "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish [This message has been edited by taramw (edited 10-31-2000).] |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
interesting that you swapped the metaphor mid-way: Cool tho - feels that way sometimes, eh? Christopher |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I rather like it Tara. Refreshing way to put it in perspective. Nicely done. jwesley |
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angelface Junior Member
since 2000-10-25
Posts 40Savannah area, Georgia |
I feel like that sometimes...nice metaphor  |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
you weave and spin around me tying me down. an overbearing relationship or just deceit...a few interpretations...very good Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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ilph Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 78 |
tara this is cool but i think you can fly out of there josh |
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