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Sven
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0 posted 2000-10-30 08:33 PM


The battle still raging
Connor retires to his tent
He does not want to be here
Why did he have to come?

He is here because he is a Knight
In the service of his King
The blood staining his hands
He tries to seek solace in sleep

In his dreams he sees his Brianna
His only love, the woman of his heart
Would that he could hold her once again
Instead of this bloody sword

To touch her face once more
To know the stories of her heart
To hold her close in the night
This is what he dreams

And when he wakes in the morning
He looks round his tent
And cries that all of it was a dream
Save for the whispers of Brianna

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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Ron K. Fox
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1 posted 2000-10-30 08:36 PM


You've done it again. A man of wisdom who paints with word, great job. Like it.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

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2 posted 2000-10-30 11:09 PM


Hearing the whispers, sad and powerful.
Sandra

Isis
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3 posted 2000-10-31 06:18 PM


Thankyou Sven *hugs* and Brianna hears echoes of her Connor.
She longs for the day peace prevails and he comes home to her....
I'll write a poem about it today hopefully...
Thanks Sven you've made me smile after a damned rotten start to my day...
*big hugs*
Isis

*I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.

Sven
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4 posted 2000-10-31 10:20 PM


Ron, thank you my friend. . .  

Sandra, thank you for reading. . .

Isis, I long for that day too. . . thank you so much my friend. . . and I'll look for that poem. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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