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I rarely say "I love you"...
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I rarely say "I love you"... |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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I rarely say "I love you"... But if I had the time Or even had a minute I would borrow a dime To call you every minute To let you know I care Giving you all my attention With a loving stare I rarely say "I love you"... I have forgotten what love can be It has caused me many heartaches Should I be thankful I lost the key? I know how to care for someone Yet the "love" part has been ripped away If I held you for eternity Would you surely stay? I rarely say "I love you"... The trust has been long gone The hole within my heart Sings a saddened country song It has been ages since I have loved Or felt the love so true But if I had to love someone... I believe it might be you! Oh yes wouldnt this be a perfect love poem!  Now I just gotta find me a man!! haha No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Yes it is perfect, just keep your eyes open (ears too) he surely must be coming. It just takes time. |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
*raises his hand voluntarily* We are nearly dead on with the stuff each of us right. I feel the exact same way you do in this poem. I'm starting to get hooked on your stuff. Keep the pen busy! Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely written DKW...i am sure you will have some volunteers haa..enjoyed..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
oh hun *hugs* i know how you feel. all to well i know how you feel. i wish i could write a peom for the one i love agian. and i would give up everything i own to hold and kiss a love again =( but alas this broken angel is all alone. great work hun *hugs* love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
DkW... I try to say it everyday to the one who means so much to me But often not is it returned Wondering why that has to be? ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, perfect, and I know about the heart singing a sad country song. Great way to state that. Now if there is a man worthy of you, he will be able to open up that little door that is still there. Sandra |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Me too!!! Oh... this is great, totally understood! Take Care! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Me? The one to love would be me? im touched!!!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
Yes, this is a wonderful love poem. By-the-way, if you meet any nice guys, try sending one this way. P.L.U.R. |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
i agree that this is a grwat poem...and bout findin a whole group of them n passing them out like trick or treat candy? lol im sure we'd (the girlz) all like 1 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
At least you are exploring some of the possibilities of love...perhaps love is searching for you...James |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
so when you do say it, you will not it comes from your heart, love is something to be cherished not so easily given away. I really enjoyed this poem. |
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