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bamagirl Junior Member
since 2000-10-27
Posts 20 |
You were the one who made the girl who never cried finally shed a tear. Too bad that once the first drop fell, I haven't stopped for years. It seems the only heaven I've ever known was to be wrapped up in you. The only hell I've ever felt was when you decided we were through. So don't talk to me of freedom, for no one is ever really free. We are all a slave to something and pain has made a slave of me. So I stand here in my chains and watch the years fly by. For time heals all wounds… now in slavery to a lie. |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
wow...this pain is deep... So I stand here in my chains and watch the years fly by. For time heals all wounds… now in slavery to a lie. Guess time hasn't been kind to your wounds. I know how much it can hurt. Be well. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Geesh, now this one hurt me just by reading it. I am so sorry you have such sorrow in your heart. I too have been there done that and got many T-shirts! But hey , it will all get better soon. Have faith!  DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
Indeed it does sound as if we have traveled the same roads. It's nice to find those you relate to  This was painful, yet it spoke to me. I can't wait to read more Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wow! your pain flows freely through these words. It is hard to get past the pain sometimes but it is worth the effort in the end. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
"You were the one who made the girl who never cried finally shed a tear." Yeah... what a finalé at the beginning!!! Loved this. Take care! ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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