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MiseryDivine
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 114
Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)

0 posted 2000-10-27 12:19 PM

~Not all there~

She stares
empty
pointless rage
she mopes
alone
depressing madness
she's caught
in his trap
stuck by her heart
tied to his fist
she's craving
love
and desire
but he never seems to
see her real
she's bounded
to his soul
by his words that seep
venom from his filthy mouth
she's painted
jagged strokes
with deep puncture wounds
slashed and stained
she's lying
unconcious
cold and alone
and he doesnt care
she's drowning
in his dirty lies
screaming murder
no one sees her
she falls
lower
into the pits
of firery hell
she moans
excruciating pain
throughout her body
she searches
for his love
yet he doesnt
want her
she's dying
alone and shaking
the cold consuming her life
sunken eyes and boniness
her soul lost
her heart torn
her love missing
her destiny given to the unborn

she's in a daze

~Misery Divine~

All i want in life is to be happy
It seems to me
How messed up things can be
Everytime i get ahead
I fell more dead
~KoRn~~

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-10-27 01:21 AM

MD~ Ahhhhh I see you've met my ex-husband......this is EXACTLY what it was like living with that creep......this brought some sad images to my mind.....great job!!

-SEA

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2000-10-27 08:28 AM

Oh yeah, I know this guy too. Hang in there, and someday it will be better. This is very expressive, very good.
Sandra

Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

3 posted 2000-10-27 09:05 AM

Oh look, i guess eveyone knows my ex-boyfriends. this was very good and it paints a picture of how it was for me back the. this was good poem it brought back memories of abad place in my life, but that is ok, wonderful poem.

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

4 posted 2000-10-27 10:41 AM

Hmm... really felt a lot with this poem... you wrote it very well

~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

MiseryDivine
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 114
Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)

5 posted 2000-10-27 07:35 PM

thankyou all for responding...i guess we've all had our fair share of this bad stuff...but thats ok...sorry for bringing back those memories... and thanx again
much love~ MiseryDivine~

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

6 posted 2000-10-27 08:21 PM

i don't get it with some ofthese guys...the greatest gift to man...was women. geez...at least all the guys here appreciate them...but really...it is truly sad...you deserve so much more. and i'm a firm believer...what goes around...

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