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Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925


0 posted 2000-10-25 06:56 PM


i posted this yesterday on open10...maybe it fits better here. still trying to feel my way around on this site.thanks for all the comments and your patience. Ron

When my time ceases,
My last breath exhales,
My life force unfurls from this physical shell,
I shall face the angel of death,
As he swoops down swiftly,
Sharpened sickle in hand,
Ready to harvest my soul.
I shall stand fast, challenge his existence,
And challenge the end of my very own.
If a battle must be waged,
Outside of this world in which we now exist,
So be it.
I shall not go easy.



© Copyright 2000 Ronald Kenneth Fox - All Rights Reserved
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-10-25 07:25 PM


Welcome Ron!!!    Yes this is definitely more dark than open 10   LOL
Although a sad or dark subject I can 'see' your spirit shining through and I applaud anyone who will not lay down and die or go quietly.  We should all go out in a blaze of glory!  Well written hon  
Isis

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

2 posted 2000-10-25 07:48 PM


Thanks isis...never give up! ron
Isis
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3 posted 2000-10-25 07:51 PM


I'm still here aren't I???             
Isis

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

4 posted 2000-10-25 08:29 PM


oops...meant i'll never give up...lol...of course your still here...glad you are. Ron
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