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Desires Awaken |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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the springtime of your kiss drifting, descending into the deep dungeons the dungeons of the abyss desires awaken down deep within beyond limitations drowning in the sea of sin how many dark lines does one cross before blinded by the springtime of a kiss unaware of slipping into the dungeons of the abyss A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Good one, Victoria!!!! How easy it is to get lost, too, isn't it? I sometimes wonder if it isn't worth it, at times. Great poem! Crakker (sheila) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Glad you enjoyed Sheila..nice to hear from you.  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Victoria, I swear that sea of sin sounds so much better than the pit of lonliness.. I like the form here, and of course, the theme.. Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Yes it does to me too haa..thanks Sandra..im glad you liked.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
hmmm. i love the way your poems flow, and this was no exception. it was lovely. jann elizabeth If you can feel that staying human is worthwhile, even when it can't have any result whatever, you've beaten them. -1984 |
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