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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
Hello everybody!! Have you missed me? I haven't. Incredibly sorry for my absence here lately, but I'll be visiting and replying more often now. Hope you like this... it's about the homecoming dance, but is now irrelevant, but it was great at the time... Blessed be! Have you ever done something that just feels so right that it simply can't be wrong? Dancing the night away, from side to side we sway. Held so close to you, touched softly in your arms. I close my eyes and breathe in deep somehow, silently, you've swept me off of my feet. Like a silent thief, you've crept into my heart through a window left ajar. The feelings I am experiencing now are better than the previous by far. You stole from me my emptiness, my lonliness, my sorrow. I find myself, as never before, hoping for tomorrow. Have you ever done something that just feels so right that it simply can't be wrong? That's exactly how I felt tonight as you held me in your arms. I lay here, writing, while laying in my bed. I have so many different thoughts running through my head. I don't want this night to stop, please don't let it end. I want to be with you tonight, so many things I could have said. I'll end it here, keep it short, and maybe a little sweet... like a thief, silently, you've swept me off of my feet. I run, I fall. I walk, I sometimes crawl. I give, I take. I bend and yet somehow I break ~Lil OnE~ |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is very great my friend. it's one of the few works i read of yours but i like it and plan to read alot more of your work. yes i emailed you yesterday plz read and email me. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Like a silent thief, you've crept into my heart through a window left ajar. liked this one a lot. very nicely done. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome back hon, I noticed your absence and missed you... Lovely dreamy poem to return with  Isis *Good will towards all beings is the highest religion* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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Lil OnE Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 234Pasco County. Fl. |
Thank you all very much. I'm glad to be back  "No man is EVER worth my tears, and the only one who is will never make me cry" ~Lil OnE!~ |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Oh!!!!! This is so sweeeeeeeet!!! I loved it, it was really great! Glad to have you back here and thank you so much for your reply, your sweet words touched me so much! Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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