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You Know What I Hate?
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You Know What I Hate? |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396
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You Know What I Hate? You know what I hate,... you trying to transform me. To change any good. To steal it all, and slap my face with evil. To wash me with your blood, and stain my skin,...my eyes. Seeing only negative. Feeling only pain. To transform my kindness, my softness to stone. To fix it all to your liking. To slice me with hate, and drown me in the devil's song. I hate you trying to drive me, to control me,...to take over. To spill my hearts contents, down three flights of stairs. Locking it all from ever returning. To kick the caring from my gut, and stuff it with the devil's juice. I hate you trying to transform me. I hate your sick attempts, to turn my world to black. To poison me with ill thoughts, and the knowledge of the sins. THAT is what I hate. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Me to kid, I hate that more than anything. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
Dear SpitFire This is a great piece, so true, and really hit home. This is the worst. Fantastic write! Sylvia |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
YOU know what I hate. You KNOW what I hate. You know WHAT I hate. You know what, I hate. You know what I hate? Everyone who tries to do this to another person. Thank God, when I love someone I accept them as they are....warts and all. And I expect them to do the same for me. Don't go trying to change me after you win my heart....it's a love killer. Very good read.....Hardrock |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Powerful emotions there. I hate that too. Why do people do that to eachother? Why is it so hard to find the right one, who will love you for you? Catalinamoon |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
yes spitfire, i hate those hatecrimes too. and the scars and stuff after ain't much fun either. but you know this tooooooo !!!! thank you for sharing this!! kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
I hate everything You're bad breath All that cheese It stinks! Save me please! When you gonna tie up those shoes You trip me out every night Always drinking the last of the booze Barfing in the bed, that ain't right I'm not phoning in to your work Two minutes ago you called me a jerk Get out of here, I'm sick of your face Ok I'm leaving I know it's your place Here's your key Just forget about me WOW! I feel better now that I got that out of my system! Thanks SpitFire for that wonderful…umm! That…ummm! Release of pressure!! LOL  Loved your poem it's always fun to reply to you. You give me lots of inspiration. Thank you for allowing me to have some fun with you in the other ones. If I go to far just say enough is enough. Or Spit some Fire at me it can all be in fun! But if you get out of hand I might just SNAP! he! he!  ( this poem wasn't directed at you but you already know that ) See you at the top HOT wheels |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You know I hate that too!! They are only weaklings who try to change you, they see good and are threatened by it. Must we all be sheep and conform?! I say nay!! Wonderful work here hon  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i hate when someone tries to change you because you don't do or act the way they want if we were all suppost to be that way thats how we would have been made. great read loved the work. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Thank you all so much for reading this lil outburst of mine. hehe. Felt good to get it out. Gosh,...I hate that....even pulling this back up again is making me get all worked up hahaha. Thanks...each and every one of you,....really. *Peace. |
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