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MiseryDivine
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Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)

0 posted 2000-10-24 01:05 AM


Its so cold outside
i feel it seeping inside my viens
Im so Empty inside
i can feel the pain
pulsating throughout my body
penetrating my soul
capturing my innocence
devouring all my love
Beating me senseless
Its so quiet here
i can feel myself growing smaller
Im so lonely now
i can feel myelf dying
The cold now spreading
the emptiness eating away
at my inner core
Nobody sees me
Im all alone here
its so cold here
Im so empty inside
Its so quiet here
I can feel myself dead
lying in this immense cold
without you
without your love
without my angel

~MiseryDivine~~



All i want in life is to be happy
It seems to me
How messed up things can be
Everytime i get ahead
I fell more dead
~KoRn~~

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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-10-24 02:23 PM


Oh, you sound like its been a real bad day..I do understand. Coldness that permeates your being. Very powerful.
Take care.
Sandra

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2 posted 2000-10-25 01:02 AM


A sign of anger, fear and maybe revolt. Great poem. I had my share of coldness. Hang in their for the sun to shine.  

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



taramw
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3 posted 2000-10-25 06:34 AM


Excellent!    

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

MiseryDivine
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since 2000-06-13
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Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)
4 posted 2000-10-25 11:14 PM


thank you all for responding....much love to you all ~ MiSeRyDivine
Isis
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5 posted 2000-10-26 12:11 PM


And the coldness INSIDE deepens with every breath.  Been there    Beautifully expressed hon  
Isis

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~


Ron K. Fox
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6 posted 2000-10-26 06:54 PM


oh, I know that coldness also...and a warm smile is longed for so dearly...here's one for you (smile*)
MiseryDivine
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since 2000-06-13
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Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh)
7 posted 2000-10-26 11:22 PM


thank you Isis...and thank you Ron...i apprecaite your kind words n your smiles..much love ~MiseryDivine~
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