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One of those days |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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Unwinding breeze creases my face, < !signature-->Clouds tying themselves in knots forming a lace, Before mother earth heaven and hell present their case Seeing the similarities, I seem amazed, Reality strikes leaving me completely dazed, Slave to the rhythm, my life I clinch, As I watch all this I dare not flinch. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) [This message has been edited by Xeonox (edited 10-24-2000).] |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
hey what kwelnesss....i really enjoyed this.... hehe  All i want in life is to be happy It seems to me How messed up things can be Everytime i get ahead I fell more dead ~KoRn~~ |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Reality at it's best. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Oh my friend it's been awhile. but i'm glad to come back and read something so great. i love the word play you use and rhyme of a story line as in the flow along one subject. you create it so well here. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
your replies are appericated very much. Thank you. Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
A vision you paint indeed. Very cool. |
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