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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2000-10-23 06:33 PM

Passions promise broken rudely,
longed for love destroyed so cruely.

Pieces of my heart lay dying
on the floor, while he was smiling.

So coldly done, it wasn't fair,
apparently he never cared.

He's on the move so easily,
no happy ending left for me.

But I may have the last laugh yet,
He'll not so easily forget..

Lady Lost
Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 470

1 posted 2000-10-23 08:45 PM

W * O * W .... You have so perfectly described a very hard situation that I am going through. I am speachless.....
...beth

"And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..."
- REA

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 2000-10-23 08:47 PM

I am spiritual as you well know, but in cases like this I tend to lean towards the malicious side,  from what I know hon, he has his memories and will probably realise the truth and his mistake far too late.  To move someone as you have it will come back to him and he WILL live to regret his indecision or indescretion.  Karma isn't ALWAYS good.. you give out good, yet get good back, same with bad, so I believe a little bit of bad Karma is heading his way.  You may not be around to see it, but it comes I know, for I have seen the proof too many times to disregard it anymore.
So as one sister to another hon, he will get his just desserts... rest assured.
Wonderful writing here hon - again I can relate...  *hugs to you*
Isis
P.S.  Sorry about the essay!

*Good will towards all beings is the highest religion*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~

firecrakker
Member

since 2000-10-20

Posts 235
Virginia

3 posted 2000-10-24 11:09 AM

I hope he realizes what he had long after its LONG gone!!! As I've said before.. he doesn't deserve you! Well done, this poem!

Crakker

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2000-10-24 01:47 PM

I dont see how he could forget a beautiful woman like you..and he will be kicking himself one day haa...like your form..enjoyed..

and i enjoyed reading isis response too.

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

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