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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
I've heard some stories, none of them are good, about how you treated my mother, never the way you should. I can't remember your face, or anything about you at all, but you never bothered to send a card, or even just to call. I must admit I wonder about what kind of person you are now, and I know I want to meet you, its just a question of how. P.L.U.R. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
LiLi....I posted a reply to this yesterday, but it must be lost in the system. A very well done poem about a deep heart sentiment. If you want to see your father, then go for it. At this stage of your life, you can take him on your own terms. Good, bad or indifferent, at least you will know. Hardrock |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Great poem. I wanted to write such a poem. Maybe by reading yours I will be inspired to write one.  Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi, good description of the situation. I hope you can find him and get some answers. (PS, my Dad was never there either) Sandra |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
the situation is familiar, although my stepfather has been there all my life(I consider him my father) I went to see my birth father...wasn't missing anything in my case...hope yours works out differently |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Reminds me of the Everclear song "Father of Mine". I feel a sadness everytime I listen to those words...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
People do change..he may want to see you too.. good luck~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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