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Scarlet Lady
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 242
Midwest

0 posted 2000-10-22 12:03 PM



Dark Passions Poets Our Peers!

We gather here in this place
DARK PASSIONS is the space
We've come here to  write
About life and it's plight
Like vultures to the prey,
We contemplate so often
At what other poets  have to  say.
Our  lives portrayed  out  as a play,
We read with intensity  of  others dismay.
For here  we  came to  voice similar pains,
We sometimes think we sound  insane?
Emotions are  raw   as they seek  to reach,
A connection  with others within their speech.
Some  of us in throws of sorrow somehow,
We wonder how this will lift from our brow?
Here we all meet,  in this place of refuge to share.
For we know there are others, who really do care!
So dark passions,  is really in our hearts indeed,
It is forever planted,   a strong rooted seed.
We all can find a growth of new life here,
Yes,  amongst other poets who've become our peers.

Our DARK  passions are much the same you see
Souls seeking through pen in hand
To set us truly FREE!


© Copyright 2000 Lynne - All Rights Reserved
DJLI
Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237
TN, USA
1 posted 2000-10-22 03:11 PM


Wonderfully done! You've written exactly how I feel about DP.  Great

"The Sun is gone, but I have a Light" K.C.

catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2000-10-22 03:37 PM


You said it! I agree with all of it. Nicely written, too.
catalinamoon

Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

3 posted 2000-10-22 11:24 PM


Coolies!

I like this...that's exactly the purpose writing can serve...

good job..

K

"He looked across the
silky surface of the Severn...
it was a famously difficult
river with fierce tides..."


From Jack Maggs


glorybox
Junior Member
since 2000-09-17
Posts 26

4 posted 2000-10-23 02:47 PM


I only come here once in a while, when I feel I will be given a chance to be read and to be shared. I come when maybe my thoughts about another's work will be appreciated and understoood.  I am glad I came today, and I a so happy you are here!!  
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