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Panther Jade |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Eyes of panther jade stalk the night Grayness of skies become puce In the midnight hour Moonlight is a bandit hiding behind the mask of lust Naked she creeps as the lavaliere of a raven glistens between her breasts Voyeur shadows entangles within the jungle of stars She follows the wings of a raven to the lagoon of the abyss Drowning within the blood of the night A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Another moody, intense piece. I am going to very much enjoy your book! Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you catalina moon..this one was darker then usual for me..but yes i hope you do enjoy it hon..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
this was visually fantastic, and i always love your style of wording. jann elizabeth If you can feel that staying human is worthwhile, even when it can't have any result whetever, you've beaten them. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Victoria....I think Jannel pretty much said it for me. Excellent style, use of imagery and wording. Enjoyed it. Hardrock |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Jannel and Hardrock.. I certainly appreciate your kind words..nice to hear from your both.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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