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Danielle
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since 1999-12-01
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Providence, RI, USA

0 posted 2000-10-21 08:38 PM


Love and pain
They go hand in hand
Loving someone can be the most painful thing to undergo
In burns and stings
It eats away at your being
Youn can't control it no matter how much you might want to stop it
You can't
"Put an end to it" you say
How?
How can you put an end to love?
Isn't that what makes us human?
Yes, so we go one, everyday with the pain of love


Blessed Be Those Who
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darkstar
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 230
Port Richey, Fl, USA
1 posted 2000-10-21 09:49 PM


Yes love can be very painful...but it can also be wonderful...it's hard to stop loving someone...I don't know if you ever really do...very good poem.

Dark Star

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