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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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I've come to a conclusion although it does still hurt. I'm better off without him he buried me in dirt. I gave him love and passion he gave me glimpse of hell. What's the use of loving him? Where was his truth to tell? Alright, I have the point now he doesn't want me still. I sure would like some answers help with this bitter pill. Never mind, to hell with him, I have a life to live, and somewhere there's a real man who wants what I can give. [This message has been edited by Isis (edited 10-25-2000).] |
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darkstar Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 230Port Richey, Fl, USA |
Great...all I can say is you go girl *with the snap things*...it's good you're getting over him. Dark Star |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Catalina, girlfriend!!!Way to go!!!You have got your stuff together...what a great piece to follow "Misrepresentations.."!! Woo hoo!! Crakker |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sandra, glad to see you are writing it all out... have a hug hey?  K |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Sandra...there will always be someone out there who wants the love you have to give. It will happen, when it's meant to be. As for this guy....well, he didn't deserve you anyway. You have way too much class for him. Love ya...Hardrock |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Good going Cat!! Great words to live.DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Way to go hon..go out and have a great time.. love the poem too.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"And somewhere there's a real man who wants what I can give." And that's what it's all about. Nice clear message..James |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~WOOHOO,...Sandra,...so strong a message. Such Power you possess,...it's in there,..gosh gurl,...let it out. Fly sweetie. Awesome words you wrote here. *Peace. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hey Sandra, good for you! I'm glad you're recovering. There is someone out there who's looking for you too, just haveto find him, don't give up. Great piece, I liked it very much! Take Care! "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Jeez girl I feel like you are in my head. Once again, you have so perfectly worded my pain. I hope one day, when the one's who hurt us most are all alone and old and nobody wants them, that they'll remember us, the only one who would have given them the world. I hope that true love does haunt. A girl can only dream.... "And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..." - REA |
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DJLI Member
since 2000-06-21
Posts 237TN, USA |
Your words speak so true to mine and probobly every other females heart. Great job P.L.U.R. |
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