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carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
-A Question- have you looked upon the leaves for a stable set of trees have you looked upon the wind for a chance to live again have you looked upon the sun for what has begun have you looked upon your heart for that start maybe today will shed some light maybe today yet not tonight maybe today the sun won't shine maybe today the clouds won't hide can you say that you never heard can you say you have no words can you say chance doesn't work can you say today is the worst has it all been for naught has it all been just to stay did it all just happen today J.L. Koehler |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
I loved this poem!  maybe today the sun won't shine maybe today the clouds won't hide Hmm... deep indeed. Take care. ~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
This is a beautiful poem! Liked the rhyme schemes and stuff. I also liked the different points you made. Seems to convey a carpe deim[sp] / make the best of every day sort of attitude. This is one of those poems that depressed or bitter people should carry around with them, just to remind them of the other sides of life's story... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Excellent, good attitude here. I love poetic questions. Catalinamoon |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
A timely reminder for us all. For me at least it was quite inspirational. great work  Isis *Good will towards all beings is the highest religion* ~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~ |
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