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Cobwebs and Tears |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Sweet embers of passion haunting her bed cObWebs and tears now replace them instead A wEb of whispers and sweet desires weaves a mirage of tomorrows fire Sultry taste of old lover still linger tracing her lips is a new lovers finger Insatiable lovers whisper until dawn titillation of sighs which they are drawn He calls her his "Sweet Madonna Lily" blending the essence of their sweet love arousing him in lace of chantilly touches her softly with his leather glove He holds his Madonna Lily tight To the tango of their dance in southern lights Drowning in her tears of cObWeb nights Reach high, for stars lie hidden in your soul. Dream deep, for every dream precedes the goal. |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
this was very sweet. and maybe lulling. a great picutre... jann elizabeth |
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CitiZen-One Member
since 2000-09-22
Posts 84New Mexico |
wow, dark and romantic. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Jannel..glad you liked..  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
appreciate your comments citizen one.. thank you |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Victoria, one more and I am going to start applauding..Tell me, have you found happiness after the old love, or do you still long for him? Email me if you can, I would love to talk about some things. Sandra |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Victoria, this is full of haunting images of sorrow and comfort offered when it cannot be received. I liked it. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you catalinamoon and Kethry..im so happy you enjoyed ... ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Victoria, you do this so very well. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Eagle One..so nice of you to say ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Victoria, I'm not sure how I missed this one.. I love it! Funny how it's hard to get rid of those Cobwebs, isn't it... Live and Love well... Crakker |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you crakker..well i am glad you stumbled across it..before it is covered in cobwebs haa.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Victoria this is passionate...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Happy you enjoyed it James..and thank you for peeking in thru the cobwebs haa... ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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