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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
i'd just like to say....these are just thoughts Sickness Hated~ I hate all this Hate that surrounds me I hate the way you look at me shattered crystal eyes I hate the way you touch me scaly rough edges I hate he way you talk to me dirty lies I hate he way you try to creep inside me crawling scraping fears I hate it when you try to pentrate me shallow pathethic excuses I hate it when you use me good for nothing, low life scum I hate the way you promise me things yet they never seem to come through empty begging useless fool I'm sick of all the pain you've put me through I'm sick of all the messes you've created I'm sick of all the times you've broken my heart I'm sick of all the times you said you'd call, and i still sit here waiting...for nothing I'm sick of all your excuses I'm sick of all the times you hurt me I'm sick of all your lies I'm sick of your I'm just plain Sick of you [This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 10-19-2000).] |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Hello MiseryDivine, I edited out the profanity from your post, because profanity masked by asterisks is still considered profanity. Christopher |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
i liked this. especially "I hate he way you try to creep inside me crawling scraping fears" it was really eerie, and i could almost feel it. |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
you said this with feeling that are so true my friend  loved this part as it was short but the meaning of it had an awesome impact  I hate the way you promise me things yet they never seem to come through empty begging useless fool Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG |
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MiseryDivine Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 114Chicago! en america...oh lala! i wish i lived in England.....(sigh) |
thanx creature and Jannel for liking my poem...hehe..its ok christopher....its kewl...much love to you all~ MiSeRyDivine [This message has been edited by MiseryDivine (edited 10-20-2000).] |
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