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I Remember When |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738
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I remember when you wrote me love notes and put petals in the bath I remember when you would hold me and we would laugh and laugh. I remember when you would dedicate a song to me, then write your own I remember when you would point, and say, one day that will be our home. I remember when you always sent me colourful pretty flowers I remember when you always gave me your thoughts ... then they were ours. I remember when you would comfort me, kiss me on the lips, and dry my tears I remember when you put your hand in mine, told me you would burden my fears. I remember when you had heaps of patience, a ready smile and heaps of joy I remember when you used to look at me in "that" certain way, all coy. I remember how we used to lay on the couch all day, and hug and talk I remember how we used to drive somewhere, anywhere, and then walk and walk. I remember talking about our future children, and dreaming of who they would be I remember when I could tell you anything, when I could just be me. I remember when I remember I only remember. ~ Tara ~ (a long one I know!) |
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LuckyinLove Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 57Australia |
I remember all the good things in my last relationship thats what gets me down, so I have to make myself remember the bad things so I can move on to better memories. but I loved your peom, I like the way you write. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Another keeper Tara...very well said. It's those memories that, even though painful at time, still bring a smile to my face. Thanks for sharing your memories with us....and I hope you make many more. Hardrock |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yes Tara, I remember it all to. A great poem kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
ok now i am sobbing. you have made me remember too. i love the rhyme. makes long ones easier to read and follow. you are getting better with every post,tara. i love your work. kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~This poem is sooo touching. Aaaww,...it's the kind that tugs at your heart. Thank you for sharing this. *Peace. |
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