»
Archives
»
Dark Poetry #2
»
The Gift of Death??? (for you, FJiznit)
| Dark Poetry #2 |
|
The Gift of Death??? (for you, FJiznit) |
|
|
Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
|
The Gift of Death I beg of you For my ever lasting love so true Touch me, caress me, take my soul Blacken my heart with ur powerful coals Glance gently into my eyes Seeing all the painful tears I cried Take my breathe and make no more My inner self has been hardened to the core The Gift of Death I beg of you For this I shall never again be blue |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Mags - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Now that's one gift I don't want!! Good poem, and sometimes we all feel this way.  |
||
|
Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes i agree death seems to be the only way out. i do understand this alot and great work. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
||
|
AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
hey there... i am going to say something that maybe won't go with how you feel but it'd worth a try... I'm not going to deny the validity of this someone in your life but would you just take a look at yourself once and see life as in every breath and you don't want to cease that it's too precious...and what good would it serve...stick in there and show your love that's the way out...not death! this poem is close to me cause like poet de vin said we all feel like this sometime... see you around...fighting If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
||
|
bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
The gift of death I have wished for only to find when I pass through the next door.I am glad I did not get my wish that I had so eagerly emplored. great work here. Blue |
||
|
Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
yes I understand you all to well on this. my head, my thoughts, my dreams, at one time. not now. love you kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
||
|
Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Well thank you all very much for your replies. But actually I am doing fine. I wrote this one in reply to FJiznit's poem post. If I go this deep with a post, than 9/10 times its fictional. But thanx everyone for your concern. Peace |
||
|
FJiznit Junior Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 24 |
I'm wanting to speak to you about this via messenger, I shall wait... |
||
|
SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh how at times this poem rang true for me. Well depicted. I am glad to read the replies and learn that this is fictional for you. Thank goodness. hehe. Loved it...dark and chilling...YES!!! Take Care. *Peace. |
||
|
kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
ah yes so simple the solution of death. it is the war of life that brings the reward of death. very good work here. your imagery is excellent. kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
