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A million chances
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A million chances |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
I saw you daydreaming was i in your mind For you were in mine I saw you sleep Gentle angel did you dream that i was holding your hand if you are lonely and if your oh so blue I am always here with a heart for you that is true Can you really see me or am i just another shadow and all that i was space Just as light as a feather can i move through your land without being seen as a man I know i should try I know i should approach and tell of my intentions But every move i make Causes my heart and my tongue to swap over Are you just a million to one Always and Forever To stay far away when I could love you More than anyone could ever Look into my eyes your ghost Will be here beside you Telling of the love that to you i will never But be whispers on the wind Drowning in an eternal spin "Mother is the word for god on the hearts and lips of children everywhere" Brandon Lee THE CROW |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This is so sad, but that's what makes it so good. A secret lover too shy to approach the object of his desire. Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Hmm... I thoroughly enjoyed reading this!  Great work! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Can you really see me or am i just another shadow and all that i was space Just as light as a feather can i move through your land without being seen as a man I know i should try I know i should approach and tell of my intentions But every move i make Causes my heart and my tongue to swap over Are you just a million to one Always and Forever To stay far away when I could love you More than anyone could ever Look into my eyes your ghost Will be here beside you Telling of the love that to you i will never But be whispers on the wind Drowning in an eternal spin ---------------- a poet need not ever be a shadow or a ghost... for he can use his gift to be his whisper ... let your poetry speak your heart, let your verse say what your lips can not yet express ... beautiful, gentle, poem dear walter take care kind poet jm And it's good that I'm not angry, I just need to get over, I'm not angry, anymore Cry when you cry, run when you run, love when you love, represent the ashes that you leave behind ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
Fantastic! Full of emotion, some of which I can relate to Great job  Let nature guide your soul. Follow the path that nature gives. |
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Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
Fantastic! Full of emotion, some of which I can relate to Great job Let nature guide your soul. Follow the path that nature gives. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Great writing Mr. Poe. A love not attainable, with ghost and all. I love it. simply great. Joel I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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